Uproar against Berlusconi receiving Holy Communion
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(04-22-2010, 03:22 PM)timoose Wrote: Augie, baby, I scored in the 99th percentile in school, forty years ago, when they taught content. Your use of English is cumbersome and never clear, which is probably because you are double minded. Perhaps you should go to a junior college and take a course in 90's Basic English Composition until you are able to take 100's level English expository writing, before you try narrative. The key is simple declarative sentences without subordinate clauses.

Henry James does not agree with this.

(04-22-2010, 03:22 PM)timoose Wrote: Try Action comics they can really help.
tim

I find it quite ironic that you made a serious writing error in a sentence that you wrote to criticize the writing of another.
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Re: Uproar against Berlusconi receiving Holy Communion - by Resurrexi - 04-22-2010, 05:34 PM



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