Look for errors in this article please

[Historian]

Please check this article for errors: http://blog.fisheaters.com/catholic-life...orrection/

Someone wrote a comment on a post which referenced it (about the Scandal of the Church) and thought what I had written on scandal was wrong. The person referenced the CCC, which uses the word, but does not treat it as a subject in itself.

If there are any errors, please point them out.

I am more interested in errors about the content, but if one finds errors in grammar, spelling, and the like, I'm interested in fixing those too.

Thanks.

[aquinas138]

The paragraph beginning "Now an active scandal is the second example" - the example you discuss is actually the third example you listed.

[Historian]

The paragraph beginning "Now an active scandal is the second example" - the example you discuss is actually the third example you listed.

Thank you.